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The line "That is not an architect. That is someone who spent thirty years standing on a cold sill, refusing to cross a line she'd been ordered to walk through" does the heavy lifting of reframing Marisol beautifully, but it also risks over-explaining what the dialing scene then dramatizes anyway—consider trusting the phone call itself to carry that reversal and cutting the exposition a beat earlier. The appended query in the ledger is a lovely device, though I'd want to see the authority's "one rank too low" strategy actually costed later, not just named, or the insight reads a little too neat for a book this committed to ambiguity.