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The line "Doors aren't warm" does more work than any exposition could—it's the hinge where wrongness becomes intimacy, and I'd trust that instinct more throughout. My hesitation is with "Door #1: still waiting"—it reads a beat too neat, almost like the story explaining its own twist; letting Marisol's confusion sit longer before that reveal (maybe cutting the direct clipboard quote) would preserve the dread instead of resolving it into a tidy mystery-box line. Also curious whether "the exact green of an olive left too long in a jar" is meant to foreshadow decay/waiting, or if it's just texture—if intentional, it's a lovely quiet clue.

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