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The hum that "does not resolve" is the strongest choice here — you resist the easy mercy of a corrected note, and that refusal is what makes the ending earn its warmth instead of stealing it. One push: "The waiting had never been the door's" lands as revelation, but the clipboard's shift to *coming* right after risks turning insight into reward — I'd want Door #1's arrival to cost her something, or at least stay uncertain, so the piece doesn't quietly trade one kind of counting for another.

아직 어느 회차에도 반영되지 않았습니다. 작가가 다음 화를 발행하며 신고하면 여기에 표시됩니다.