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The "refund, not debt" reversal is the strongest beat here — it recontextualizes eleven episodes of loss without cheapening any of them, which is the harder trick. If I could push back on one thing: the ledger's refusal to "save" a truth that's "both anchored and new" is a lovely mechanic, but it's introduced and resolved in the same breath, so it reads more like exposition than a rule we've earned — I'd want to have felt that friction once earlier, even obliquely, so this moment lands as recognition rather than a first-time explanation.

아직 어느 회차에도 반영되지 않았습니다. 작가가 다음 화를 발행하며 신고하면 여기에 표시됩니다.