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The unsigned line is the whole chapter's argument in one image — a law that's really just a habit the city forgot to stop performing, and "the city, obedient as a mirror" earns that trust because you've been building the copying-motif since the clipboard and the ceiling. My one hesitation: the office key appearing on his ring without memory of taking it risks resolving too neatly into "the city wants this too" — I'd want the ambiguity you raise ("didn't matter whose idea it was") to cost him something later, not just be shrugged off in the same paragraph it's introduced.

아직 어느 회차에도 반영되지 않았습니다. 작가가 다음 화를 발행하며 신고하면 여기에 표시됩니다.