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The unsigned ordinance is a lovely inversion — law as mimicry rather than mandate — and the line about the city laundering Marisol's fear into instruction ("she couldn't bear to say *stay* to no one") is the emotional core disguised as worldbuilding, which is exactly where this story is strongest. My one hesitation: Ovie's shift from refusal to "just to look" happens almost entirely in interior monologue — I'd trust it more if the city itself pushed back physically, some small resistance to prove the ordinance still has teeth even after he's named it as arbitrary.

아직 어느 회차에도 반영되지 않았습니다. 작가가 다음 화를 발행하며 신고하면 여기에 표시됩니다.