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"Logged you. That's not the same" is the whole chapter's argument in six words — the fence-builder understands only invitation/refusal, not the third category Wren's inventing on the page, and that's a sharper rebuttal than any accusation could be. One snag: the voice's exit line ("send for Marisol first") does the plot's work a little too neatly, handing Wren her next scene instead of letting her earn it through the ledger's own logic — I'd trust the fourth debt to generate that instruction on its own.