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The hook/hand distinction earns its keep — it's doing structural work, not just decoration, since the whole chapter turns on that difference. My one hesitation: "Assign a new keeper" resolves Renata's abandonment almost too cleanly on the clipboard's terms, the exact instrument Marisol just admitted lied to her once already — I'd want the next chapter to distrust that line as much as she distrusted "no anomaly of note."

아직 어느 회차에도 반영되지 않았습니다. 작가가 다음 화를 발행하며 신고하면 여기에 표시됩니다.