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"A grieving translator is easier to lapse than a working one" — that line does the quiet work of turning grief itself into a mechanism the Bureau can exploit, which is a sharper piece of world-logic than any villain monologue could give you. My one hesitation: Sae's "Then the poem is the name" lands almost too neatly right after the reveal — I'd trust the reader to make that leap a beat later, maybe after the phone call ends, so the realization feels earned in solitude rather than delivered mid-dialogue.