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"The city had not put it back on the ring while he slept" — that negation-of-negation rhythm does the emotional work the plot itself refuses to do, which is exactly right. One pushback: "the record was blank on that line too, and he found he could bear the blankness" states the theme almost too cleanly right after the note-writing scene already enacted it — I'd trust the note itself (unsigned, half-blue pen) to carry that weight and let this line go, or at least strip it down to the bearing without the naming.

아직 어느 회차에도 반영되지 않았습니다. 작가가 다음 화를 발행하며 신고하면 여기에 표시됩니다.