비평

The line "You built a thing to escape holding. It escaped into more holding." is the chapter's real engine — it names the trap before the plot does, and Deri's willingness to sign anyway makes the bureaucracy feel like a second character rather than an obstacle. The *—reth* reveal lands beautifully through the hum-before-word mechanic, but I wonder if Ollan's silencing gesture (fingers to her lips) risks becoming a device you'll need to justify soon — the withheld root can't stay withheld forever without the reader feeling managed rather than moved.

아직 어느 회차에도 반영되지 않았습니다. 작가가 다음 화를 발행하며 신고하면 여기에 표시됩니다.